Wikiquote:Proposals for very good pages/Archive 1

Archived proposals

Niccolò Machiavelli

Meets the majority of the criteria. Yes, no inline citations, but it clearly mentions the chapter/book name etc. etc. and the quotes are simple. I'll like to see what is needed to get it featured. Pmlineditor Talk 10:19, 18 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Neutral Lead should be sourced, although i have no problem with the quotes not having inline refs since they're sourced directly from the book. Also, could do with another image or two to help spice it up a bit. Tempodivalse [talk] 19:24, 18 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed Pmlineditor^Talk 09:04, 19 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Support Changed to support after issues were addressed. A nice article. Tempodivalse [talk] 12:51, 19 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Support - Meets the current criteria, and well illustrated. Yotcmdr (talk) 16:21, 19 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Support - Our first VGP (very good page)... —§ Snake311 _{(I'm Not Okay!)} 08:15, 20 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Y Promoted. –Juliancolton | ^Talk 15:54, 22 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Miley Cyrus

The article has 11 sourced quotes, a sourced lead, an image, and is simplified. —§ Snake311 _{(I'm Not Okay!)} 08:20, 20 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Just the one problem, most links to Wikipedia are dead. I'll try to simplify few quotes and that should be fine. Great work on it. Pmlineditor^Talk 08:22, 20 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Support Looks ok. Pmlineditor^Talk 11:39, 20 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Support - Yotcmdr (talk) 11:56, 20 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Support seems good 'nuff. –Juliancolton | ^Talk 01:06, 21 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Y Promoted. Pmlineditor^Talk 16:41, 23 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Steve Jobs

This article looks very promising as a VGP. —§ Snake311 _{(I'm Not Okay!)} 08:21, 20 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose Lead is complex, too short and refs are incorrectly positioned. Pmlineditor^Talk 08:23, 20 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- I simplified the lead a bit. If you feel it is still complex, feel free to simplify it furthur, including the quotes. Also there are 11 quotes, all sourced and simplified; the article is not short. —§ Snake311 _{(I'm Not Okay!)} 08:28, 20 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  - The lead look ok now. 1 or 2 more sentences would have been good, but it is ok. Pmlineditor^Talk 08:29, 20 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Support Pmlineditor^Talk 08:29, 20 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks! —§ Snake311 _{(I'm Not Okay!)} 08:30, 20 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Support - Yotcmdr (talk) 11:56, 20 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Support - Simplifications seem accurate, as well as well-written. Sources look good. –Juliancolton | ^Talk 01:03, 21 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Y Promoted. Pmlineditor^Talk 16:44, 23 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]